Feedback to our pitch,

The majority of our class felt that our pitch for our thriller idea was too complicated, although we believe that we can pull it off, in light of hearing the feedback we have taken out some of the shots such as the first shot of a wheel driving in, the reason we did this as we felt that it would take extra time and effort, and would not really be beneficial for us, and for our thriller.

Our class belived our flashback idea was goood although we are having doubts to whether we are going to pursue this idea as it may be to complicated to film and fit into our timescale.